Writing Plan Task 2

Intro (paraphrase question)

• Bringing technology closer to children for doing task and life is a two-sided matter. It’s possible to be a good enhancer while the bad impact is approaching too.
• disagree

Overview (reason)

• has entered the digitalisation era
• bcs with tech, develops both creativity and efficiency

Body Paragraph 1 (abt digitalisation era)

• conventional changed into the virtual world
• electronic device replace paper/physical structure
• example: e-learning, e-sport, e-entertainment
• repeat the main sentence

Body Paragraph 2 (abt developing creativity and eff)

• open-minded, trade of culture
• faster and bigger data exchange of info
• example: virtual culture exchange through an online game/forum/delegate, interactive apps for learning
• repeat the main sentence

Conclusion

• the argument whether computer for child’s usage has more negative impact than the positive impact is being disagreed
• positive impact emerged due to the digitalisation era and could develop both creativity and efficiency